Comments : Open Doors to Closed Eyes

  • 7 years ago

    by ether

    This is brilliant. So brilliant I wish I could hear it read out loud instead of reading it because I think that's what this calls for - which is a feeling I get only when reading poetry of a very high calibre. I love the form, the fragmented rhyme (and fragmented sentences) and the metaphor of "salted thunder". 5/5

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Totally blown away!

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Wow is all I can say!!