Comments : Its Time For Take Off

  • 7 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Excellent little poem particularly liked the theme and the last stanza...

    "We truly believed this world goes round,
    Even in your dreams they will haunt.
    What you give is what you get,
    Your deeds are self-propelled don't forget"

    Milly x

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Gel,

    Great write and one I will try to remember to comment more fully on later.

    take care,

    Ben

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    A very insightful piece with much food for thought.

    Em