Comments - A military burial

Kasie ( F P C D ) at 2017-01-05

Beautifully written, it have gave me chills. It sends a strong message that vets deserve respect whether they are family or not. Well done

Brenda ( F P C D ) at 2017-01-05

Thank you Kasie, they truly do.

Golden AnGel Rhapsodist ( F P C D ) at 2017-01-06

Bravo on this Brenda. As if I can witness the scene. .you are very good on visuals. ..
Sad tale but very well done

Gel

deeplydesturbed ( F P C D ) at 2017-01-06

Brenda.. wow.. speechless.. well done.

Em ( F P C D ) at 2017-01-06

Brenda, there are no words for this apart from sad but beautifully written.

Em

Brenda ( F P C D ) at 2017-01-06

Thank you ladies. I can see this scene like it was yesterday.

Mr Darcy ( F P C D ) at 2017-01-09

This had my vote. There is so much here and all of the imagery is crystal clear. When poetry is this vivid it stirs emotional streams until they bubble and overflow their resisting banks.

Brenda ( F P C D ) at 2017-01-09

Awww, thanks Michael. I appreciate your wonderful comments.

Renegade Ruse at 2017-01-09

There are no words for how sad and beautiful this poem is.

Kudos.

~ Renegade

Brenda ( F P C D ) at 2017-01-09

Thank you so much-that means a lot.

deeplydesturbed ( F P C D ) at 2017-01-10

Brenda, i loved this in the challenge and i love it now too :)
well done.

Brenda ( F P C D ) at 2017-01-10

Thanks N, I appreciate you...

Ezeani Sunday at 2017-01-18

Wao!!! I felt challenged to die for my country. However, I am not a soldier. What can I do?

Brenda ( F P C D ) at 2017-01-18

Just thank a veteran for serving, support our troops. That's the best thing we can do for our soldiers. Thank you!


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