Comments : If you knew

  • 18 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Awesome what a wonderful piece of poetry!

    --Sher

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    That was an absolutely incredible poem. It really makes you think about other people, and their pain and feelings. Very well done, I have to say I think this is your best poem yet. Take Care! Brooke~

  • That is so pretty and so true. like oh my god. i love ur poems about life there all so true.

  • 18 years ago

    by Christina Gomes

    Wow that poem was breath-taking...and sadly its true. i enjoyed reading. great job. keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by miracle

    Hi I really love your poems, your quotes. Just by reading it I can tell that you're a very beautifull person with good thoughts, whatever you're struggling with Always hold on
    'Cause there are so many things that go wrong in Life But to Beautifull ones make it all worth it
    Never forget the people you love or love you, and take good care of yourself.. Don't do something silly.
    Keep up the good work, 'Cause i don't say this things quick but you're really talented. Keep it up and stay strong..
    With love, Milou.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    This is truly one of the best pieces I have read in a while. Just everything about this one.....superb. Wonderful message to be shared and so true. I'm speechless.....hugs, love, Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by JJ

    Touched by these words..how true. I agree with Ann...you did an outstanding, superb job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsey

    If you knew the power of your own significance
    Would you realize that you alone can make a difference?

    Loved those lines! This poem i am printing and hanging on my fridge!! It will be my everyday paper I wake up to and read! I loved this poem because I have answered yes to some of those questions because I have made a difference in someones life and its one of the greatest feelings in the world. If only other people could answer yes as well maybe there would be less people hurting in the world. You truly have a gift and a wonderful heart! I loved loved loved this poem!!! 5 gold stars....
    ~Chelsey~

  • 18 years ago

    by JodiieBaybeh

    Wow erally really good poem loved it 5/5 keep writin that was great xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    Beautiful poem. Powerful and poignant. I loved this part:
    "If you knew a person with disease was dying
    Would you tell them to give up or to keep on trying?
    If you knew the meaning behind a poor man stealing
    Would you punish him for wrong doing without feeling?..."

    Outstanding, write!

  • 18 years ago

    by Razorblade

    That was purely excellent.

    -Taylor

  • 18 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    This is a very good poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Flawless I say...what an incredible piece! Every word placed wonderfully...I love it, and I agree that everyone can make a difference in someone's life...in several iives...if they only realize...and you just...wow...

    "If you knew the power of your own significance
    Would you realize that you alone can make a difference?"

    I love it all, really, but the end there is especially inspiring. Thank you :) I do start to doubt my power as an individual...and wonder if I truly am making a difference...I'll keep on trying ;)

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by brittany

    WOW i loved it great wrk:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    This was a very powerful poem with very strong messages attached and very provocative, making the reader think about so many difffernt issues going on around us. we should all really take mor note about issues and people around us. Superb, truly one of the better poems that I have enjoyed reading in quite some time.

    Warmest regards,

    Steve

  • 18 years ago

    by Cuddles

    This is one of the best poems I have read on this site, and I have been on here since October 2005. It's truly inspirational. And you're right. Many people do only look at the surface. I used to be one of them. I've learned how to look past it. This poem is touching in so many ways. Thank you for sharing it.

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Wow.... i have goosebumps... this is probably the most beautiful poem i have ever read. its just amazing.. it flows perfectly, and really gets the message across without being to in your face about it.. its just the perfect balance of everything.. wow.. i dont even know what to say ... just amazing poem.. this is a really REAALLYY great poem :)

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    This poem really hit home for me. Being a nurse I see people from all walks of life and have learned you can never judge someone by what you see on the surface. There are many things that make people what they are and lead them down their chosen paths. Sometimes just a helping hand from someone or a kind word can make a difference. Good job on the poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    Beautiful and so true! It's such a selfish world we live in but i'm glad no everyone is! Excellently written.

  • 17 years ago

    by Nikki

    I love this poem and your right there are alot of people who are blind.