"Ill love you forever, and ever and ever
Till theres no forever left to give
As long as you know, how I feel about you
I can set my soul free and live."

I used to think like that, but found it only damaged me.

I do hope you manage to get over whomever it is...

Friggin' awesome poem. Definitely heartfelt, great job!

Wow wow wow... I. Love. This.

"A place where nobody hurt, or nobody hated,
People loved and shared.
Youd never feel unwanted or worthless
No worries or need to be scared."

*I think it'd be better without the "or" in the first line there.

And where is the entrance to this perfect world of yours? Can anybody get it? heh...I can never really remember my dreams. My perfect world would be very similar...with my love by my side! Maybe, if there is a Heaven, that's what it will be like.

Yesh, keep the hope!

"If life just makes you want to cry
Dont simply whip away your tears
The pain will just keep building up
Bringing out your inner most fears."

*wipe away your tears

Very beautiful poem and dedication. And...don't tell anyone, but my real first name is the same as your best friends's. Rose is the second part of my first name. Samara is pretty rare...I just thought I'd mention that. I bet she loves you too!

I'm going to show this to some friends. Thanks.

xxx

Its The Poem That Won My Contest! And My Heart...I Loved It 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Wow, truly stunning. As I read this it brought tears to my eyes. You commented on my poem, and thankyou so much, you have made me see things in a new way. In your comment you really helped me, and in this poem, I feel you have opened my eyes to a new light. Thanks so much, I love the poem, you've really helped
Polly