This is greatly written poem, with a great meaning. you have done a great job that deserve a 5/5.

very well written. 5/5 from me.

AWwww. I'm so sorry.
That's soo sad.
Meth is a very deadly and a heartbreaking drug to see someone you care about on it.
Keep it up.
5/5 God Bless

~*tay*~

I'm really sorry. =[

This poem is really well written. I advise you to always capitalise where needed though, otherwise your work will look sloppy.

5/5.

Flow was choppy and not exactly great but the emotional quality was awesome. It's full of what is almost despair and sadness. Other than flow problems it was a cool write. The second stanza is my favorite. The emotion is well done.
~Faith-less

=( Thats sad... But however, It does tell about how familys are today. The last part is my favorite. Its so true and gets down to the point. And, Sorry about that!!

~Shae

By the way.. 5/5... Forgot to put it! haha

This is a GREAT poem, I give it a 5. I have several about meth if u'd like to read them. I am a recovering meth head myself and meth takes away your ability to feel or care. Good luck to you and your family and GOD bless you all.