Comments : Parallel Paranoia

  • 17 years ago

    by Norrie MacDonald

    Loved the wording, it worked so well. good read for sure.

    ACE!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Wow...this poem was kind of an eye opener you did a great job keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    A very bleak outlook which i don't agree with but the poem was well written

    your servant:
    david