Comments : To love a dream [part ll]

  • 16 years ago

    by Corruption

    Good poem very well written you did a good job im glad i read it

    keenan

  • 16 years ago

    by Nea forever and ever

    I liked it a lot...well done....check out some of my poems rate them or comment please...it will help me a lot....

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Well written..and even better than the first part.

    good job! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sharon

    Beautiful! i love the last stanza. Keep it up your very talented

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I didnt realise that this was the second part, when you entered it into the august contest at PFP.
    But you got third place for this wonderful, well written piece. It flowed so well and was inspirational and i loved the wording
    love always,
    Tara-Kay
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by kevin Boundy AKA the ghost

    Great poem it hit real close to home i like it alot because its cryptic meaning was cloaked very well thank you for writing this poem it has inspired me

  • 15 years ago

    by Alison

    5/5 Very well done. =]