Wow.Amazing.Deep emotions and great metaphors and analogy's.No wonder you got a great mark.Rofl.

'Lighting bolts flash white hot,Like the burning anger within.'

Simply amazing.

A 5/5,
Keep writing,
Rado

This poem is a little to heavy and sometimes that causes the flow to break. Even though, I really liked it. The metaphors you used described the idea of the poem nicely. 5/5

The last like is my favorite.
This poem leaves lasting effect on the reader.
The feelings emancipated in this poem are powerful, and the poem itself is very sad, but beautiful.
you never fail to impress me Elaine.
Very well done.
Kat xxx

Amazing. The emotion and depth in this is intense. The first line, there is something about it that caught my whole attention straight away. Your vocab is so strong, I feel like I know exactly how you felt when you wrote this. I love your mix of the storm and your emotion, very well penned.
5/5 again, you deserve it.

Tammie

It was a really great poem. I hope you got a good grade on it. Great poem. 5/5

<mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

Excellent poem 5/5

This is a really good poem, it has a behind meeting that isnt right in your face... those are the best kind of poems.
5/5

The imagery in this poem might have been some of your best out of all the work I've read from you. Everybody can relate to this poem so well because life isn't always just sunshine and happiness. Excellent job with this one a for sure 5/5 GG23 P.S. 3rd line first word your missing an n :)