Comments : Nobody's Child

  • 16 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    This poem is really good.the imaginative was perfect and the flow was good too.
    so true
    5/5
    tc
    best wishes

  • 16 years ago

    by Anna Marie

    I'm moved beyond words, my goosebumps the only testament.

    Your work touches, caresses, and begs to linger within.

    You've been added to my favs!!

    Hope you're smiling!!
    anna

  • 16 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    Wow. Such emotion, and understanding. The way you have portrayed the neglect, and taken it away, and given renewed hope to the life of your subject is amazing. You really are an incredible poet. Well done. xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Noelle Wright

    Omgah this poem was sad very sad and i loved it This poem was a good thinker your a great poet !!! ^^

    Noelle

  • 16 years ago

    by Barry

    Very moving poem that has touched the hearts of many....... some do care!
    Children are our future....

    Well done baby.......your are....amazing!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Fr0g PrincE

    Great Poem... I must be the one to congratulate you first.. anyway, thank you verymuch... Lots of thanks Debs!!! A great image of Life reflected in your poem.. I call this a WINNER.. yeah.. Great piece Deb!! I love It..

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Deb
    What a wonderful choice for the winner:) Congrats.
    Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Sam Azam

    Nice choice of topic. Very moving. Childhood is such a fragile thing. You've captured that brilliantly.

  • 16 years ago

    by Amber

    Omg good job on this poem 5/5 it made me shed a few tears! keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Debby, congratulation to you too, you deserved it more than ever you know....

  • 16 years ago

    by Daisy Bradford

    Wow thats deep

  • 16 years ago

    by Adelle

    Amazing poem very sad a book you should read it’s called nobody’s child I think it may inspirer you.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    Really Special, this one...Very Moving...and Real....I Thank You for this truly successful effort...

  • 16 years ago

    by YourSweetAddiction

    Omg its so sad that kids are actualy going true this it makes me cry

  • 16 years ago

    by sezz

    Wow wow wow this poems is excellent! u r really talented keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lauriel Chambers

    This is one of the best poems I've read on this site in a long time! Excellent!

  • 16 years ago

    by Katran

    Beautiful. the rhyme was perfect, the content magnificent, good work. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Satans Reject

    Amazing poem.
    It's so beautiful, but yet so sad.
    5/5
    Wish I could give you higher tho.

  • 16 years ago

    by jackie

    I love this poem because i can relate sooo much. nice nice work!

  • 16 years ago

    by greenfairy

    I loved this! It made me cry remembering my family's adoption story! You did a great job!