Comments : Butterfly Kisses

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelly

    Woah, woah, woah.

    This was truely tremendous lol.
    Know i really loved it, all cute and innocent. i never wanted it to end. Really great, all happy and joyful, very magical. Definately 5/5, brightened up my day:)

    Kelly
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Loveless

    I luv this poem. i think its probably one of the best on here. I wish my world was like tht!

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashley

    Wow gem ya did it again

    great i love it

    YOU AMAZING!
    ARE !

    gem its sophisticated yet great for little girls! its well amazing!

    I love it

    i really love it

  • 16 years ago

    by Nic

    Nice job
    i loved it

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    I love the way you describe the magical world little girls live in.
    It's a beautiful poem, nice flow.

    Best wishes,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    I keep telling you how wonderful and amazing you write. You have incredible talent to turn anything simple and ordinary into a beautiful masterpiece.

    Great job.

  • 16 years ago

    by browneyezz

    Wow that was amazing i love this poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Estefania

    Wow that was a really good poem loved it great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by MyEscape

    You have a typo on the first line of your second to last stanza. LOL Confused yet?! Other than that, this poem was GREAT! This was really good. It brought fairytales to life again for all of us that are older than ten! It was really good!
    *ME*

  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    The reason I chose this poem as a winner is because It is SO sweet, It reminds me of something like Mary Poppins or Bednobs and Broomsticks, It was so imaginative. BRILLIANT poem xxx alex xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by My Mistakes

    Love it! would love if you voted and commented on my new poems

  • 16 years ago

    by Pamela G

    Wow, awesome. Every words are really beautiful together. Excellent piece!

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Congratulations on the spotlight!

  • 16 years ago

    by Forever Depressed

    Enchanting and wonderful

  • 16 years ago

    by laneka

    Great job reali like it

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    I LOVE IT!! iIts ah-dorable!

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Gem
    Congrats:) R.T.V.W. Is very proud of you!
    Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Ariana

    This was awesome :). I really like how it's not confined to the 'love' genre yet could fit into it. I thought the rhyming could be worked on a little bit, maybe just so the syllable count is more even. But apart from that I thought this was fantastic. The imagery is really amazing, I really felt you brought this 'dreamworld' to life for the readers. What a picturesque fantasy :) Well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by silvershoes

    Butterfly Kisses...Gem, Gem...You do know about the website? For women attracted to adolescent girls. Kinda disturbing, yeah.

    Anyway, great poem. I dig.

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderful Write, Enjoyed, Superlatively Written!!!