Hello Gem your work is "fantabulous". I believe that poets are born as such, and from what i've read, you are a true poet. Your poems are authentic and heart felt, keep up the great works.....

WOW!!!!!!!!!!! I love this poem. This was a LOVELY poem. Keep up the good work. You deserve a 5/5

xoxoxox
Jess

Wow this is really good i loved it.

This is just so awesome, I so loved the idea of this poem, I've read like thousands of poems and they can be so related to each other, this poem is so unique, I loved the beginning & the ending stanzas, they were so very inspiring..

I think this is the first time for me to read your poems, this encouraged me to read more =)
now Keep it up
best of luck
xxx

LOVE YOUR POEM!!! very nicely written! hope to read more to come. 5/5. ~tina

Congrats on the win Gem. This is definitely a beautiful write, it puts such a pretty picture in my mind... well done and congrats again.

Wow Gem! Once again your work is so beautiful! I love your work it's so amazing and creative! I'll keep reading your things!

~Laura~

Awww i love this poem...so sweet. it was really fun reading it .... keep up the great work and take care
:)

Wow, this poem reminded me of everything that I wanted when I was a kid. Such happy times ^_^

That was an awesome poem!Good work.It really made me smile.Keep up the good work.

Oh my gosh!!! i totaly loved it!
keep up the good work!

Thats such a beautiful poem, full of imagination and magic, i love it, its a great piece, it brought a smile to my day, well done, this was really excellent. xox sam

Wow beautiful poem

This is really nice great job

Gemma!!!

I missed your poems!!!
Not been on here in a while and i am so glad i read this one!!
It is beautiful, this is my dream world, i dream about it often!! Such a lovely, happy, innocent poem. So sweet and cute, absolutely brilliant.
Take care.

Kelly
xx

I really like this, it reminds me of my father-daughter song, Butterfly Kisses and i think its nice.

Your mind is loud and your words are moving. Nice work on putting your thoughts into creation.

This is such a sweet and warm poem... very well written.. i love the whole concept and the whole thing is just beautiful. I love it. great job.. keep it up =)

Aww cute! I loved this it reminded me of Peter Pan haha Very good indeed nothing I would change about it. 5/5 for sure
kaila

WOW ii LOVED iiT!! AWESOME WORK KEEP iiT UP!! 5/5