Comments : Butterfly Kisses

  • 16 years ago

    by Ashley Q

    This is an AWESOME poem... 10/10 best ive ever read

  • 16 years ago

    by Newbie

    Its so cutee and pretty and happy.
    i love it!

    and the rhyming didn't take away from what you wanted to say too!

    it has such bedtime story / music lyric potential :P

  • 16 years ago

    by Lenny

    That is beautiful. I hope it becomes famous and that people recite it to their children before bed evey night :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Anisa

    Omg! i Love this poem sooooo much! The words just go and everything! Wow! Amazing! Keepit up! Cya

  • 16 years ago

    by StonedGooberz

    This is going on my favorite poems list this is aswome perfect stuff almost had me crying in a good way 6/5

  • 16 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Wow. you are an amazing poet. this surely is better than the fairytales i've read. it's so lovely. 55

  • 16 years ago

    by shantavia

    Very touching

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Wow... This is one of the best poems I have ever read. Maybe the best - seriously... I love everything in it. The rhyming, choice of words... The words you've chosen to create this piece is like magic... it really amazes me.

    The opening stanza was superb... I was really 'hook' in the poem.

    And the ending was perfect...

    Gem, please write more! I look forward to reading more from you :)

    You deserve a 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Courtney Lynn

    I have to be honest I couldn't help but laugh as I read this. The poem it's self is great, but it's just not my taste, pretty much the TOTAL oposite. But you have great tallent=]

  • 16 years ago

    by mimi

    Wow ...
    this is beautiful
    so full of happiness

    well done x x

  • 16 years ago

    by AllCutUp

    This is honestly amazing like wow. undescribable. its beautiful.

  • 16 years ago

    by katie

    I like it its very out there and makes me smile always a good sign

  • 16 years ago

    by Sinah Motshegwa

    Wow! what a beauty,it takes you to another world.

  • 16 years ago

    by Pink Romance

    Man i really love how you write poetry and i really hope i can become someone like you...

    i have a slight depression and no one knows.. i cant tell them. but poetry is my second life now and to think about it i dont really know how it creeped upon me...

    but i would really love to be your frend and get good writting tips from you... i am new on the sight and i want to meet new ppl also.

    hey when you get this i would like to ask you a question.. nothing personal.. but yeah..

    hey i think you should like write a book on poetry or something cause your really that good.. = )

  • 16 years ago

    by alia

    PERFECT!!!! I rly rly enjoyed reading this poem it's great in all ways... i like the idea the style and the flow of the poems keep it up!!!!!!! =D

  • 16 years ago

    by FELTON PHILLIPS

    Very sweet poem. Lovely ending. I actually enjoyed reading it. I do not write much sweet poetry. I did write one a while back, Through a Child's Eye. Check it out if you like.

  • 16 years ago

    by shantavia

    Wonderful i love it its so koo and amazen how beauiful poem so sweet

  • 16 years ago

    by Not

    I love this poem...Its sweet...=)

  • 16 years ago

    by Not

    I don't know where i should start with this poem i love it for many reasons, one because i love to eat and it involves candy and that its so cute but the mean is so strong i love this poem if i got a dollar for every time i read this poem ill be swimming in dimonds thats how much i love this poem
    xoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    I love this poem. It like something a little girl would imagine. Awesome job.
    -vino