Charcoal Waves

by Kelleyana

Gazing at the charcoal waves, brings melancholies to my mind. Trapped in a web filled with black and grey, thinking no sun will shine in my day. Which happy life had never seen clouds of grey? Those words often came my way.

Through the dark there came a star that shines on my heart, showing me the fine lines between darkness and light. Closing my eyes slowly it feels as if you are by my side, and all those feeling kept deep within, I can no longer hide. My mind fades off into a blissful place where memories of you can never be erased.

Thoughts of you cascade through my mind like rain, each drops filled with an image of you which all lands into a puddle Portraying those wonderful time we share. I cried to the sky for you to hear me, cause without you, I can't be me.

How long can we pretend to go our ways, when our minds seek each other every minutes of the day? We cannot change the thing that already went wrong, but from our wrongs we learn what's right.

No matter where I go in my heart you will stay because you are the light to my darkest day.




By kelleyana Junique. Written for PR Club Image Contest.

Image Used Charcoal Waves copyrighted by Jade Ashcroft 2006

 

Submission date : 2010-12-21

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Sylvia ( F P C D ) at 2010-12-21

Nice work with the image you used. Your words start with a feeling of turbulence then love as you talk about the emotions and feelings this person brings to your life. Well done. (I included a link to the website if anyone would like to see the image, Charcoal Waves http://esoteric-art.co.uk/scenes.html

Cindy ( F P C D ) at 2010-12-23

Kel
What a emotion filled piece. I could feel the love you still have for this person in every word you penned.
Nice work!
Love Cindy

Meena Krish ( F P C D ) at 2010-12-29

From start to finish I liked the flow as well as the smoothness of this write and the sentiments it holds..a lovely write :)

Robert Gardiner ( F P C D ) at 2011-01-08

Very nicely Written, Kel. Wonderful!!!

Richard S ( P ) at 2011-01-10

Your recent work is very ellaborate and involved. You are feeling more comfortable with the english language. Nice to catch up on your work.