Submission date : 2012-02-24
Last edit : 2012-09-28
Yakori Mohammed ( F P C D )
at 2012-02-26
Thanks loads Nei, for the comments. I'm still learning so I'm sure the more I read and write, thus, perfecting the craft. I'm grateful. :) ..
Lebanese Phoenix ( F C D )
at 2012-02-26
Yakori, I like this a lot, the colors..the sounds.. the whole set.
Yakori Mohammed ( F P C D )
at 2012-02-26
Thanks LP, I'm grateful.. :-), God bless you.
Ingrid ( F P C D )
at 2012-02-26
You have a way with words..I will have to reread this a few times more to really grasp at what you were trying to convey...
'golden tears fo wrath', I really like how you worded that.
Well done, excellent poetic language
5/5 Ingrid
Yakori Mohammed ( F P C D )
at 2012-02-26
Thanks for your comment, I appreciate loads.. Bless you :-)..
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