Submission date : 2012-04-08
Everlasting ( F C D )
I enjoyed reading the poem, but I have to be honest this part
stealing the life of a man
whom I still love, if I can.
Got too repetitive that I kept repeating it in my head even after I finished reading, hehe.
But the last stanza was my favorite one.
Ms Happiness ( F C D )
Gteat poem Timothy:)
I too enjoyed reading it:)
Karla ( F P C D )
I love the inclusion of Odin and the imagery in your piece.Always a pleasure to ead your pieces bro.
Lioness ( F P C D )
Unique topic to write about - I love that.
Loved the rhyming - felt so easy to read.