Submission date : 2012-06-15
Thomas ( F P C D )
Interesting subject for a poem with a nice flow to it.
Purple Rose ( F C D )
I agree with Thomas, this is a interesting subject for a poem. To tell you the truth, I can't really tell if you are comparing the similarities of the two, or contrasting them. When I read this, it sounds like the captains are also being judged with the criminals. I guess it just depends on the way you read it...
Interesting poem :)
Hannah Lizette ( F P C D )
Great poem, very unique.
sometimes the captains are just as crooked as the criminals.