Submission date : 2012-08-09
Lostlove1 ( F C D )
There is always such wisdom woven into your writes Joseph. I think if people are willing to listen they will always find a very strong message inside your poetry that whispers.... oh so softly to the soul.
BLBrown ( C )
This seems almost like a plea, a call for help. You do a good job of describing temptation and how much you have given in to it. And definitely the reader understands your desire to be more, to be better, to be good in the eyes of God. Very nice job.
mandy ( F C D )
I felt this was written with a lot of passion, many lessons to be found in your poetry. 5/5