Key to happiness

by alka mendiratta   Sep 3, 2014


Expand like a sea
Accept all you see

Keep humming like a bee
Collecting nectar in a spree

Like a fruit laden tree
Give all for free

Open the lock,I plea
We are all bestowed with a key

Bond in love,never flee
With lots of gratitude to Thee

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  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Judging Comment:

    I saw the title and wanted to read more. The
    opening lines:

    Expand like a sea
    Accept all you see,

    I like the expression the author used. Telling the
    reader to travel far and wide with one's heart like
    the sea and be acceptable. The sea though rough
    at times accepts all kinds of creatures as well as
    humans. Whatever rubbish is dumped that too is
    accepted. Like so an open heart should be like a
    sea.

    Another one that I liked is this:

    Like a fruit laden tree
    Give all for free

    There is happiness always in giving and as you
    keep giving the heart too becomes happy and
    loving. Again, I like the choice of words used by
    the author. Overall, this poem shows the
    positiveness needed to achieve happiness for
    happiness is not based on materials alone.

    Enjoyed reading this write.

  • 9 years ago

    by Mohan

    I think it's Difficult to accept whatever we see.
    This is fabulous and rhyming is good.

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