Silverwhispers

by Nil   Sep 14, 2014


Silver whispers caress the drums
Beating in my ears
Soothing ever so gently
Melting away the cares
The trouble
The hardships of life
For tonight it will just be
You and I

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  • 7 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I feel like this piece would benefit from a little bit of punctuation. Just because the format made it difficult to establish a sense of fluidity or rhythm. I love how the first thing you wrote was an image that personified so many different meanings, that was a great use of skill. And the fact that so much can be interpreted or such countless results can occur from reading this was amazing.

    I've read through a pretty good chunk of your works, but this one speaks the most to me. This is the one with the most skill so far. Nicely done.