The Song

by sonya   Nov 17, 2014


Each and every word that comes out of my mouth is a song.

It may be as sweet as honey,

Bitter as a lemon,

Soft as a cloud,

Hard as a rock,

Cold as ice,

Or as hot as blazing fires.

Either way, it'll make your ears ring.

The words that come out of my mouth creates a song that makes the crippled hearts dance to the beat.

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  • 9 years ago

    by Everlasting

    The words that come out of my mouth creates a song that makes the crippled hearts dance to the beat.

    ^^ in this line, a possible suggestion:

    "Create" instead of "creates"

    Because you are referring to what the "words" (plural) do. The words create.

    Other than that, I like how you have defined/compared your words to. It doesn't matter how they are but they have a rhythm, a song that people can feel.

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