Don't you feel.....

by alka mendiratta   Nov 27, 2014


Mothers are by and large taken for granted

Tries her best to give all we wanted
Loving,caring spirit never flaunted
Light up our path whenever it is daunted

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  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Very good and with a wider message.

    We can all take our mothers for granted and shouldn't.
    Take care, Em

  • 9 years ago

    by Augustus Black

    The rhyming is very decent. Wow!!! Very well crafted this write is. In this Four lines only you have described the great role of Mothers. Well Done!! 5/5.

  • 9 years ago

    by Mayday

    :( Well this makes me sad. I think yes, a lot of mothers are taken for granted! Especially in the years that their children are growing up but HOPEFULLY those same children grow wise and start to understand what all their mom's have done and still do for them. I know I have. <3
    Anyways, I like this - More should read it

  • 9 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Alka Ji
    it well nice poem as well as correct.

  • 9 years ago

    by John Doe

    It's great how you can fit in a lot in words so few.Absolutely love it.

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