The Wonderer

by HumanInATree   Jan 22, 2015


White clouds passing by with gentle breezes
Flowers flowing with tantalizing feelings
I accepted your gratitude, that i do
As a human nothing more, that well be
All i see and all i do as a human, nothing more
As a servant of the land, that i am
Wondering though theses pleasant fields
picking smiles and precious laughs, that i do
Passing time and counting stars, till the sessions pass me bye,
till the end nothing more.

-HumanInATree

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  • 9 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I love the imagery here. This is very well written even with its lack of format (Sorry, I'm weird about that). Anyway, nicely penned glad i found this piece, it's got a great feel to it.

    there are a few typos and grammar stumbling points, so reread through this and you should catch them :)

    4/5

    • 9 years ago

      by HumanInATree

      I have no former writing skills or an eye for spelling. To be completely honest I have dyslexia. I try to pass it of as stupid auto correct, but i guess that want work on this site. Thank you on the complunents and I hope to meet many great poetic souls on this site.

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