I should have

by Everlasting   Feb 25, 2015


I met the sword on my saddle today
I took it out
And I swayed it to the air
as if with its sharpness, it could cut
even the oxygen that you breathe,

But too foolish, I was,
to just swayed it and swayed it to the air,
I should have kept it in the saddle,
And just breathe the air

February 24, 2015

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  • 9 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Vawooooooo
    I get it meaning correct,
    sword cutting the air,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,again n again

    if it is that mean what i am taking it really very awesome imagination.
    Great job

  • 9 years ago

    by Karla

    Lovely!