The Bubble
by Sean Ash Jun 19, 2015
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Does an author not write a book? A poet not write a poem? A musician composes a symphony? Do we not write our very own history using our actions as the very pen? Does life not have its own chapters to which we are part of? Does a baby decide to be born? You see, our thinking is bound to the zeitgeist and conditions of our time. We might think we are free, but we are merely the air caught within the bubble. |
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7 years agoby Em
Fantastic poem.
We might think we are free, but we are merely the air caught within the bubble.
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Loved this, so true.
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7 years ago
by Sean Ash
Thank you Em :)
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8 years ago
by Darren
Love the word Zeitgeist, I have been watching a few documentaries and films on the subject recently,
I feel like I am poking my finger through the bubble you mentioned.
hasn't popped yet though
a long way to go....
as for your poem?
This site is a stickler for layout
if you laid it out like this;
Does an author not write a book?
A poet not write a poem?
A musician composes a symphony?
Do we not write our very own history,
using our actions as the very pen?
Does life not have its own chapters
to which we are part of?
Does a baby decide to be born?
You see, our thinking is bound to the zeitgeist
and conditions of our time.
We might think we are free,
but we are merely the air caught within the bubble.
It may be better received,
Writing is an art and art is art, the layout is up to you
just a suggestion delivered from the bowels of my humble opinion.-
7 years ago
by Sean Ash
I'm so sorry I've only just seen your reply. Thank you ever so much for your feedback, and I think what you say is fair. After all, I would love and welcome people to read it and in a format that best suits the reader's eye.
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