Fragmentary

by DarkLight   Aug 7, 2015


I wrote to the sun,
how I rode to the moon
and uploaded my stars
to my coded cloud.

The whole universe
has me in reverse,
she is holding her purse
already in the bus.
The woman I love
is the memories I have.

Tangled with life
is my bubble to strife
troubled by wife
ends cold with a knife.
You try to connect
but you fear no correct
million ideas in years I've collect

A reminder of love
or what use to be the laugh
prison they have
for my freedom to preserve
dying of age for nothing he deserved.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Great piece and uniquely penned. "I wrote to the sun how I rode to the moon" - that's wonderful.
    All the best,
    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Im surprised to be the first to comment but its impossible for me to read this and not.

    I Really like the feel of this write, you used really nice language and descriptive writing to engage the reader and I really like the format you used.

    "A reminder of love
    or what use to be the laugh
    prison they have
    for my freedom to preserve
    dying of age for nothing he deserved. "

    ^^^^^^Love this stanza :) Epic.
    Great write

    • 8 years ago

      by DarkLight

      Thanks Naughtmouse, I was trying a new format or way... and landed with that. Hopefully I will make it.

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