The thirty six righteous men.

by Darren   Aug 25, 2015


Six billion different souls intertwine -
different ideals and opposed views
a scab on the skin of the earth,
once picked will only bleed questions.

Only thirty six are worthy, truly,
to stand and hold up a society
that crumbles like a crust desiccated
in scorched heat.
Thirty six dominoes rooted
whilst anonymous millions fall -
taking down fresh ideas
cures for cancerous diseases
future generations
mothers, brothers and sons.

As you stand on the shoreline,
wondering why you see in semi circles and
marveling at the expanse of life,
as the wet sand moulds around your toes
holding on to its infrequent visitor
with a mind open to others.
Somewhere, (hidden in poetry)
more life is extinguished,
one more ejected into middled-um -
equilibrium reaches tipping point,
my journey starts by falling to my knees.

It is here I find inscribed into stone -

many roads traveled
branches spawn yet more branches,
questions unanswered,

a bush of charcoal
remnants of tableau exist,
dusty tome of war.

My mind travels
to a succulent forest, where
flora remains virgin,
development yet to be developed.
Timber exhaling as anchoring
roots continue to stretch,
blossoming sentinels of enchantment
and peace, tranquility oozing and dancing
through entwined limbs,
sharing raindrops.

A tomb the only embellishment
granite standing soldier-like,
alien amongst gargantuan oaks
screaming for attention,
a chiseled message
proving human trespass.

As life cycles turn,
should prophets earn a profit
when trading insults?

Reminiscing on the mud and metal
of war leaves men feeling raw,
a few footsteps gained.

I daydream to a mountain top
another stone out of place,
auspicious amongst believers
of one almighty faith.
Here I find confusion in the cloak
of normality, unable to speak, to feast
to enjoy, to destroy -
banished from communities
living my one life as an oddity
following the bell that tolls.

When, finally I have an audience,
I ask aloud and with conviction -

whilst humanity has opposites,
whilst God has his Demon,
whilst good shows us bad,
whilst life ends with death,
the din shatters silence,
dreams distort reality,
man has woman,
boy has girl,
darkness shares its time with light -

What is Earth's antonym?
Is there another world where only the thirty six dwell
removed from this place
to ensure our souls can wander?

I awaken next to you
knee deep in seawater,
face filling with this angry current.
I drown for seeing too much.

*****
Thanks to Colm for your suggestions, I have edited as suggested apart from the 'and' in stanza 7 as it alters the syllable count for the Senryu.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Joey Matthews

    Very well written poem, I wished I could read the version before the edit so I can compare but really, this is a great piece and very well put together.

    Keep 'em coming!

    • 8 years ago

      by Darren

      Thanks Joey

  • 8 years ago

    by Koan

    This is one long poem and to be honest I try to stay away from but you have captivated me from the first line so I am here to say ~enjoyed the read~ Thx!

  • 8 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    I made this rather long winded comment on the forum thread, but begged Darren to resubmit the poem so i could place it here.

    A vast diversity of men intertwine in such opposition as to cause more harm than good such that the 36 righteous men of myth are all that hold civilization together.

    He loses vitality getting lost in wonderment through sterile contemplation; evil continues unabated regardless of his good intentions. Admitting he is helpless in the face of such endless malevolence he prostrates himself to a higher power. The Rock of Ages seems to give direction, but no abatement of the torment. The complexity of harmful interaction itself defies a final solution.

    He reflects on the belief that Goodness of Life streams from the primeval forest. Yet, the gates of Eden are a blockade keeping man from regaining innocence; the expulsion from the garden is irreversible.

    Likewise, false prophets who propose endless promises of salvation while living in luxury prove humankind unworthy, while the history of constant mortal conflict leaves us forever grubbing.

    The Tower of Babble, man's audacity, is broken, so that men are cast further into confusion by not Hearing each other. Yet established religions take this Deafness to Reason as normal and exclude he who seeks sanity.

    Finally, he comes to understand his inner Truth and decries the inescapable dichotomy of existence. He questions whether even the worthy 36 can abide with such madness, but must live apart. In the end he is reduced to profound tears of despair, for you cannot unknow the Truth. He is left with nihilism.

    • 8 years ago

      by Darren

      Thanks for such a great comment, you have captured most of what I was trying to say in this piece.