Puzzle of a flowerseed

by Nadia Selmann Casia   Aug 31, 2015


A flower seed
growing in trouble
it was guaranteed
my very own puzzle
it had to go wrong
here in my bubble
of coke and speed
booze and weed
a rubble for sure
until I went pure
no longer misled
cause in rehab I went
so I could spend
feelings as a cure
to follow a thread
instead of appealing
I will be seeking
for the meaning
in my life.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Wonderful write :) i really like the honesty you display here (something which i can relate to) i love your word choice and again how you set this out....i read it a number of times in my head and out loud and i am torn....on one hand i love the lack of punctuation when reading out loud you dont wanna take a breath so younjust keep going.... but on the other hand some punctuation may control the reader a bit better...only my opinion but i guess it depends how you wish for the reader to take it...i also love that you're a rhymer too! 5/5

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