Macmillan coffee morning (Senryu)

by Mr. Darcy   Sep 26, 2015


One mug of Latte
and a slice of Battenburg:
Hair falls from my scalp.

michael
2015

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  • 8 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Good work on the Senryu, Michael.
    I could almost picture you enjoying your morning coffee. You kept this small and revealed a very human side of you, well done.

    Not sure what Ben is saying, but I am sure you did something wonderful, so well done on that as well:)

    ((hugs))

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Michael, this is brilliant and I know the story behind it! Your senryu ability inspires me to keep bashing away at them.
    All the very best,
    Ben.
    ps congratulations on rising to that challenge and raising the money you did!