100m Olympic final (Senyru)

by Mr. Darcy   Nov 11, 2015


He explodes from blocks,
Leaving the field in his wake:
Thank God for doping

michael
2015

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  • 8 years ago

    by GB

    I like that technique of cutting when used smartly, it what added too much to this beautiful piece. You are doing awesome job with all forms of poetry.

    Cheating is always disappointing :)

    Very enjoyable, Micheal. Thank you for sharing.

  • 8 years ago

    by Hellon

    This made me laugh out loud. When I was younger I used to think these athletes were just so dedicated to their sport that that's what gave them the speed to achieve the impossible....how niave of me haha!!!

    Great tongue in cheek looking at how it really happens :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Michael

    I am sorry that it has taken so long for me to comment on this wonderful senyru and to congratulate you on your 200th poem.

    As Darren says, it could be placed into the humour section. Maybe we should have a black humour section on this site as so many senyru seem to fall into that category!

    A shameful topic that has been given a humorous twist by your talented mind.
    All the best and take care,
    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Darren

    Hi Michael

    You should post this under humour.
    Such an under used section on here

    This is a great Senryu, just shows how much you can cram into so little.

    well done.

  • 8 years ago

    by NOOR

    Hello Michael :-)

    Congratulations for your 200th poem in this site. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

    Doping is SO morally wrong yet atheletes usein for that and very little get caught. Sad that sport is not clean.

    • 8 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      ^^
      I find humor is the best tonic. The world is too serious so looking at it with goggly eyed glasses helps somewhat. Lol