Three Months Clean and Sober (Senryu)

by Maple Tree   Jul 5, 2016


Born with soft, strong wings
flew into the depths of hell
broken, still flying.

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For my Daughter Robyn (Bird Baby)

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  • 7 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Judging Comment:

    Despite the lack of detail here, this piece is incredible in a way that few other than Maple can achieve. The imagery is relateable in a wide manner of situations and so many people feel this way towards people they love. This is a write that is sweetly dedicated to a well deserving daughter, but still manages to describe every member of the human race at some point or another. Absolutely one for the win, and if not more than worthy of the hm because everyone needs to hear this at some point in their lives, and somebody is always on the sidelines just searching for the right way to show that they're near by when things get better or worse.

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What a wonderful senryu about a mother's obvious pride for a daughter with demons but has come out fighting anyway.

    This genuinely moved me.

    SL

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    Andrea, what a beautiful Senryu! You must be so proud of your girl! I'm happy for you too, it's not easy having a loved one with addictions, I know you've been on a long journey with her. Hugs!

  • 7 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Love, love, love. Through every stumble and fall, those wings will life her up. She will make it through <3

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Andrea, such a sad yet fantastic written piece.

    Em