Powerful and Dominant ( The Blitz)

Oh, Yes... Ate Gel. I have done it and I don't want the teacher say to me "Get out of the class." HA! ha! ha! Ha! Ha!

Haha Gel, don't make me jealous now. My eyes are already turning green haha :p stomps up and down like a frenzied child lol

Very nice life poem for lifting high the readers' soul.

I like this one, it's very powerful.

Knowledge is dangerous
Knowledge is power

Nice work.

Gel, I read this before and upon reading it again I feel there are so many things I could talk about. As Michael said there are many words of wisdom and advice within this piece than we could all possibly take something from. I do like the short sharp couplets which lead onto the next and I tried this form when you first posted this piece and gave it up as a bad job lol though thanks for posting because it must have had much thought behind it.

All the best, Em

Hello Gel,

Now this is something different from you. A short trailing series of couplets. The last word leading onto the next. For me this gave your poem a refrained quality; almost musical.

The content is full of wisdom and in places, nonsical fun. Lol

Well done, Gel.

Take care,

Michael x