by Simon Hayes
Submission date : 2006-03-01
Last edit : 2006-03-01
Autumn ( C )
Thats really good. When i saw the title i thought it was going to be about dying but then i read the first line and ...i loved it :P keep it up!
Just Wishes ( F C )
Agree wih ure theme 100%. we need such poems to revive our lives and i loved esp these lines :
What goes around, comes around,
I'm sure that's how it goes
all the best,
The Wingless ( F P C D )
This poem is very true. Life is too short for all that stuff. The flow in this was great, it didn't have a lot of imagery, but I don't think you were expecting it too? Anyways, I agree with you 100% life is too short for all those things.
Sondos ( F P C D )
The rhyme here is perfect without sounding forced. The message you are conveying is clear and well portrayed. Your choice of words really is great. Well Done.
Melissa ( F P C D )
Simon, "Vanilla Fragrance (Quatern)" so beautifully written.. I could actually smell the vanilla in the air. Awesome poem! ;o)