Snowflake Crystals

Great write! Such an obscure topis (how did you get the idea) and so wonderfully carried off, "will the cold wet ground entomb them.
their very core of being
washed away, with out a trace of ever existing" I can't help feeling that you aren't really talking about snowflakes (or maybe I'm just reading too far into it) an any rate I loved it, 5/5 x

Wow this is great. i love how you use the snowflakes and i love this:
upon reaching their destination
they are reminded...
their fate lays unknown to them

actually i love the whole thing but that was one that i really liked. amazing job

Wow this truly was a beautiful and indepth image
The 4th stanza particularily stood out the most to me
The flow and vocabulary was well constructed
Great stuff :)

They make their decent.

Descent has an s in it . .

Great poem -

slowly falling
dancing, twirling

I really liked those lines - it put a sound in my ear . . a sort of twinkling sound . . hehe The poem really absorbed me as a reader, so I could see the snowflakes in my mind, and I saw the many people milling around, uncertain in a shopping centre - don't now why - just came to me. Loved to read it, thankyou.

Peace. [Sole]

Yeah, that was awesome, it flowed okay, and was a good read
xxxx