Submission date : 2006-03-31
Cherise ( C D )
This was a great poem about a new born baby:)
I'm an only child, and i was always glad i never had any siblings...this poem made me want one :P
great work :)
Ashley Paul ( F P C D )
That is a very good poem that you made! I loved it and it made me smile quite a few times! Your poem has great imagery. 5/5 from e! Keep up the fantabulous work! ;)
Robert ( F P C D )
I loved the insightfulness of this piece it held an almost melloncolly athmosphere to it and was a great read I gave it a 5 because I am just awe struck from your insight great work Plot121...
The Lonely Rose ( F P C D )
Awwwww..i absoulutely luved this poem!! its very sweet and it makes me smile a 5/5 and im puttin this in mi favs!
Marian ( F P C D )
Enchanting. The seeming plaintive atmosphere of the poem, along with the heartwarming thoughts portrayed, captivated my heart. I further adored the theme you used. How first moments of a baby brings joy to every mother is rather tantalizing and nostalgic. =]
`I liked how you illustrated a child as:
"The worlds beauty
Held in the arms of love"
It's a beautiful piece, overall. Perhaps applying punctuations will enhance its flow and the poem itself as well. But, nevertheless, it is a fine effort. Take care. ~Marian