Submission date : 2006-12-28
*Gem* ( F P C D )
"it feels like i'm missing a piece
an empty void i cannot fill"
I can relate to this couplet and i'm sure a lot of people on this site can too.
I love the structure of this poem
Poetvoices ( F P C D )
I love the fact that you did use a "normal" word pattern! I LOVED THE FORM! :)
CHOKE ( F P C D )
Lovely poem mate. 5/5 deffinately. i wouldn't change a thing :)