Ticking Clock

by Alissa   Apr 3, 2007


It sees the watching hand go by,
without and awkward notion.
Lightly ticks that only minute,
to wake that sleeping ocean.

Clouds roll in with rainstorm mood,
like a waking prey a bird.
With light soft whispers singing free,
but cries are never heard.

Can feel the sun rays fighting back,
but lacks the strength of anger.
To defeat the untamed ticking clock,
and wipe the bloody dagger.

Near night time rises down to south,
yet doth not want to set.
May run with nothing but whispered words,
with a taste of full regret.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    I really like this poem. Topic is interesting and every line in this piece is written excellently. Third stanza is my favorite one.

  • I like this one, you do a pretty well job at writing, I would have to say, if you're only 14, then you have much time to improve, continue writing. =)

  • 17 years ago

    by Corruption

    This is awesome good jobb i love it u did an awesome job on it it is different then anything i read before better then alot of other stuff i have read also good job i love you lots ttyl:):)

    keenan