To Remember...

by KeyxMashingxParody   Apr 19, 2007


Out of every second of every day,
A moment stands still, and a memory is born,
Into a world of forgetfulness and tragedy.
More and more I wish for a sweet, blissful memory,
Like every moment I know, I've kept to myself...
I forget it all...

Into each day another moment blinds me from fact,
My imagination grows cold, and my mind fragile,
Like a child's life, it can be taken away by a short fall.
A brief second in time can kill without warning,
And every time I try to remember and feel...
I forget it all...

To believe that everything will end, seems foolish to me.
Somehow the passion keeps it grasp on me,
And the belief fades away until everything is black.
Darkness has it's hold on me, and yet.... I like it...
So much, to die for it seems valiant and pure...
I forget it all...

My mind is forever in wonder of life and how it should be,
How it should uphold itself in peace,
And forever be known to a blind world.
Living in a time of memories and surprises,
Yet never having the heart to truly inspire it...
I forget it all...

Until the day I officially lose my grip on my heart,
And fall to the sweet bliss that is soil and rock,
That I may feel this passion of belief in something better.
To hear the sweet silence and peace it would bring,
Out of this life I've lived, and passed away...
I remember it all...again....and again...
(It haunts my mind)

-Liz-

(This was one of my "spur of the moment" type poems, all from scratch, so it might be rough. let me know what you think!=])

~muahs to all~

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  • 16 years ago

    by becca

    Whoa! a beautifully written, really powerful poem. the repition throughout gives so much depth and meaning to it. a really enthralling and captivcating poem. keep it up! xXx

  • 16 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Hey,
    I have to say in the two poems of your's ive read youve mastered the art of repitition wonderfully. "I forget it all...", youve extended the point your trying to make, its exactly what repitition should do and you have done that. Your style seems to be using repition in all teh stanza's apart from the last, considering the ocntradiction youve made from all the stanza's and the last, it works brilliantly. the hryming was good, none of it seemd forced at any point. The flow was good. The overlal poem was quite enjoyable. Keep writing, and thank you for your comment. xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    I really like the words you chose here. well pinned excellent flow. I really liked this work. good read 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    I though this was a wonderful poem.. It was awsome to read.. Keep up the good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    The wording and flow of the poem was fluidy and perfect..but i just want to take ur attention to somehwre that breaks the rhyme a lil
    I like it...
    This thing...maybe it's just my opinion but on the other hand it was so great to read it
    Keep it up
    Laura