Meant for more..

by janiL   Sep 10, 2007


~i may have been blind, deaf, mute, crippled and obtuse all my life.. but now I've found my destination, although my way is still unwritten.. i know, I'm
meant for more

I'm meant for more
thus etched within my blood
visions of unopened door
only key, all through I've had

my eyes have shut
yet now unveiled
to see uncut
my journey sailed

my heedless ears
be now unfastened
away or near
shall know no end

my lips' been sealed
so I ajar
to herald my yields
through this course of far

my limbs confined
i now stretch forth
and so to find
my travel's worth

From my veins burn
my blood that screams
for more! it yearns
meant more than dreams

my mind imprisoned
unhinged, now free
a new found horizon
so clear to me

my impounded soul
now be unfettered
the time once stole
this moment return

my spirit mortified
i let you loose
to only own abide
aptly none accuse

my key at hand
an envisioned end
onwards an unknown land
with single door unopened

I'm meant for more
and this I know
beyond that door
there..

..I must go

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    I'm meant for more
    and this I know
    beyond that door
    there..

    ..I must go

    ^This is pretty effective ending but it should be like that( I think)

    I'm meant for more
    and this I know
    beyond that door
    there...

    ...I must go

    Anyway good poem, unusual subject but don't understand is the note that you wrote above the poem part of it, or that is your explanation?

    Anyway once again original, your choice of words is great and you made powerful atmosphere in whole piece, imagery is also vivid! Well done!

  • Now this poem was absolutely wonderful especially the structure. The whole looked amazing and the flow was amazing also. It's very well written and shows a lot of feeling. Great job!

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Very nice poem and the flow is beautiful plus the descriptions. The overall picture provoked by the content and the intensity if the poem is great. Keep it up dear :)

    Tc
    Fsams