Submission date : 2007-11-19
debbylyn ( F P C D )
I love the message and rhythm and flow of this piece....it rolls along with perfection from beginning to end.
"A heart still beats,
When love does end,
You think it won't,
But it will mend."
^Trying to move on is so hard....but time does heal....beautiful phrasing...
"Though we bleed,
It proves we live,
And if we try,
We can forgive."
^Reminds me of that phrase...what doesn't kill us makes us stronger...
Well thought out and to the point...a joy to read! Take care, Debbie
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Dark Delirium ( F C )
Amazing flow of words... I adore every line in this poem... You keep writing and you will be a great poet in time to come... You have shown potential in the poems you write and the way you express emotions in words...
You're doing well.. Keep writing! (:
Beautiful Chaos ( F P C D )
A great encouraging comment