Comments : Abortion

  • 15 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    A very powerful message in this poem

  • 15 years ago

    by khobo

    Wow... striking poem; very strong. Its nice how the poem got deeper and more serious, reaching a climax and then ending with sort of a twist. The second to last stanza was a bit off for me, but other than that, nice work.

  • 14 years ago

    by JuggaloHomies

    Very well spoken send such a powerful message...idk what to say this is truelly amazing it starts out as how you dont want the baby and you dont give it a chance then slowly it turns into a mistake but this is really good i really enjoyed reading it 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by shenoa

    This poem is so very controvertial, and I must say you've written your opinions seamlessly on this subject. I'm pro-choice and have done research for my reasoning. Yet, you still gave me chills. That's what a good poet does for me, makes me rethink my very own beliefs. Great job!

  • 9 years ago

    by JesusFreakAuthor

    WOW!!! I love this poem, wonderful job, I am a pro life activist and this really spoke to me, so sad, brought tears to my eyes and no matter how much I tried to wipe them away they kept coming back, this is a powerful poem for a powerful couse, 100/100