Comments

Sylvia ( F P C D ) at 2009-10-06

Desire compared to a rose. Wonderful and well written. Well done.

Cindy ( F P C D ) at 2009-10-06

Pinky
What a wonderful piece.
Excellent!
Take care
Cindy

Princess Fiona ( F P C D ) at 2009-10-06

You said a lot in this sweet little poem:] Sexy !
It had a great flow and loved the rhyme . Very nice

Lonely Rider ( F P C D ) at 2009-10-06

Beautiful write...
loved the word choices... to me it sounds lovely than erotic :)
keep writing :)

T e m p s ( F P C D ) at 2009-10-07

This was a beautiful write. I remember writing a poem about a rose and using it as a metaphor to describe burned hope or something. You wrote something absolutely magnificent, this reminded me of that poem of wrote but the opposite. I really enjoyed this, although it was written with few words it was extremely well done no matter what the length. ( :

Meena Krish ( F P C D ) at 2009-10-08

Roses do have a tendency to turn our moods
into passion's road. A short write where the
message comes across very clearly..good one!

kelleyana ( F P C D ) at 2009-10-13

Very lovely poem. Few words that says so much. Well done, kel.

Corinne ( F P C D ) at 2009-10-19

Very nicely done - Just the right hint of eroticism :-)

Courageous Dreamer ( F P C D ) at 2009-10-19

Congrats! Well deserved win. I loved this poem, such a short poem but it was awesome!