Sylvia ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-06
You're not crazy or mad, just in love which sometimes could be confused with craziness or madness. (smiles) Well done.
Cindy ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-06
Melody
Isn't funny how everything changes when we fall in love :)
Yet I know I love you
of that I am so sure
loneliness was a disease
you've become the cure
Great job on this piece. I love the ending. Love can ease so many of life's hurts.
Love Cindy
Frank Maguire ( F C D )
at 2009-10-06
Your talent shines through once again Melody. Excellent in everyway......form, structure, rhyme....and of course the theme.
Frank.
T e m p s ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-06
You are definatly a dreamer who lives in the clouds :] But theres nothing wrong with that...that does not make you crazy! To be sure that you love someone is a very good thing. Well done! This was beautiful.
Countess of Monte Cristo ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-06
This is so wonderful,Sista...I like how you mixed the confusion yet the complete certainty about your loved towards that person.
5/5.. Countess
Quiet Insanity ( F C D )
at 2009-10-06
This poem is you.
You bring a smile in each of your poems . You're a combination of magic and wonder.
The rhyme and flow was so good. Nice job :D
DreamOfOlwin ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-07
BEAUTIFUL write! Loved it
el... it IS so you, Lol. Thanks for bringing a smile to my face . An excellent piece, about love! Well done :)
PinkySwear ( F C D )
at 2009-10-07
Your words hold such a wonderful feeling of complete emotional freedom and expression.
I really enjoy your love poems they generate real love that is open and deep.
Well done dear
Meena Krish ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-08
Love makes us do some crazy things & I
can assure you that you are not mad..this is
what love feels like :)
nightsan ( F C D )
at 2009-10-08
Wow.. Lady melody i really really love how you made this one. Hope i can do the same. Take care always and stay love in your heart.
inToxic
at 2009-10-09
Love the FlOw! works well... oh and love the ending... sweet **** ! lol 5/5
Gabriel crash gordon ( F C D )
at 2009-10-16
What a super love poem. Different in every way. Cool last line.
PinkyPrincess ( C )
at 2009-10-24
Aww.. this is a sweet and interesting poem... Good job!
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