Sylvia A ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-24
Gabe, a form and well done with it. Unique, lies quivering in the shadows, such a vivid image and they do fear the truth. As long as we have integrity, it will overcome those lies. Good job.
Rainbow Dreaming ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-24
Gabe I loved this. Lies do quiver under the scrutiny of truth. They may be believe but eventually are bright into the light of honesty .
I adored this.
Courageous Dreamer ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-24
This was very well done, what a creative way of describing lies. Wow you are awesome. Words of wisdom you have created.
Ingrid ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-25
All lies will eventually be revealed, Gabriel..the truth always previals!
Nice to see you trying a new format:)
God bless,
5/5 Ingrid
DreamOfOlwin ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-26
WOH... a wonderful Josephs star :) And a wonderfully penned poem... so full of truth! Amazing job on the format Gabe . Loved it. Well done.
Meena Krish ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-27
Very well done with this form and liked the
topic you wrote it on..good write!
Lonely Rider ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-27
Wodnerfully penned... well done on the form :)
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