MERCY is never shown ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-10
Ok i liked this the desperation of escapeing i really liked the choice of topic and you portrayed it so well i liked the sense of reality and fantasy you did a great job 5/5
Ash ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-11
This was such an amazing poem... The words you used created such vivid images in my mind and every stanza errupted throught with so many feelings.
I thoroughly enjoyed the way you started with "I think..." It had a great impact on the poem and as I continued to read it I could feel the emotions going through especially in the last stanza.
Amazing work! Keep it up!!! 5/5 from me.
Michael D Nalley ( F P C D )
at 2009-11-16
I love the depth of your poems and you write with such style
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