Comments : Like a Box of Chocolate

  • 9 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    This is a wonderful metaphoric poem! This message has a few angles... one of sadness or loss of a friend perhaps and another of temptaion for choclolate is temptine... temptation in a relationship perhaps? Really enjoyed this piece...

    One thing: In your last line...

    I didn't liked chocolate,
    anyways...

    did you mean to say "Like" ?

    Very unique piece Luce!

    • 9 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Oh yeah, thank you Andrea! It's fixed.