Comments : Excerpt from a Dream

  • 9 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    This is a mind blowing write .The flow and imagery is exuberant .We all work hard to be thoughtless and free from the clutter.
    Falling in love with the thoughts of your loved one and in sync with each other,a wonderful write.
    Loved the title 'Excerpts from a dream '

    Such a dream coming out true,is attaining bliss .
    Beautiful !!!!!

  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Judging Comment:

    An interesting title and an interesting title. A
    dream within a reality or a reality within a dream
    to have two souls blend as one and move swiftly
    in sync! I could also hear the writer's voice coming
    through in this piece. Its as if she is talking
    with her other half.

    I especially liked the fourth stanza; as it was
    vividly smooth and touching. The tone, the feelings
    and the smoothness of this whole poem unwrapping
    gives the reader a warm feeling..enjoyed this read!