Let me start out with this: this poem is spectacular! Omg I can't believe this it's unique, it's stunning, and it rocked my socks off! Congratulations, and that's why I nominated it for this week. I loved the form of the poem, the words were nice, and the rhyme and flow were quite nice. Only thing that is annoying me is the many commas you don't need commas everywhere hon, besides that it was great. 5/5

-Mori

Hello

This is a great piece of poetry, wonderfully laid out and unique in its content. I will never write quite the same way again....the imagery really is vivid throughout.

Well done and take care,
Ben