Oh my word!

How you created this I will never know, your wording skills are incredible!

Well done on using the quote, I love how creative you made this piece and also how you made it your own and did not just quote the quote in it.

The words are inspiring, and also very touching. You can tell the passion in the words for life, for love, for being happy and content with life, and with yourself.

I love the use of the pinball, it really was a great way to portray that ricocheting effect.

I also liked the creativity of the coffee, and the heart, that was excellently done and I think it was very unique also.

I think you ended the poem greatly with the mention of taking a gamble, showing that life is about chances, and we never know what they will take us to, but there is only one way to find out.

Loved this piece, and thank you for writing it!

Weekly contest April 6th
Judging comment:

Very interesting perspective, especially with that controversial introduction "
My body isn't a pinball machine, ".... the quote is interpreted in a very well written piece where the writer used some very interesting vocabularies in the first stanza, and depended on the question in the second stanza to reveal her thoughts, neat layout and very successful ending.