Comments : Waiting for a bird to sing

  • 8 years ago

    by hiraeth

    Love this!

  • 8 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Beautiful

  • 8 years ago

    by NOOR

    Wonderful writing straight from heart. Keep writing hun. :-)

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Congratulations on this piece and the win, Karla.
    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Cindy

    Karla
    Another poem you have penned....full of metaphors. What images you leave for the readers mind.

    and it aches me
    ^^^
    You might want to find another way to say this line. It doesn't read right.

    Otherwise nice job
    Take care Cindy
    Congratulations on your win

  • 8 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judging comment

    Karla's poem this week is breathtaking!

    Her brilliant and elegant metaphoric display of the leaf was truly out of this world. the sorrow and madness of the world and events can be felt within each and every line, just beautiful!